Thursday, January 19, 2012

Which one of my poems is better? There are 4!?

1) Hero

A hero doesn鈥檛 have to fly, or be really strong,

It just matters what they do all the day long,

They might be scrawny or week,

It鈥檚 not how they look, but how they speak,

They might be stuck in a wheel chair,

But they always manage to care,

Neither size nor height should be a tool to judge,

You might loose a friend because you begrudged,

Always cease the moment to make yourself a friend,

Cause you might go with out one to the very end,

That person who you left behind,

Might have been the hero kind.



2) Happy 14th Birthday!

How old will you be this time in the year?

Fourteen is that right? Is that what I hear?

Fourteen what an age a time to be proud,

You might even cheer or be really loud,

You鈥檒l get presents and hugs so be really bright,

You might even change in ways like your height,

You better remember this day till the end,

Cause this day will never come again,

Fourteen then fifteen then sixteen two years,

You鈥檒l be driving a car that has great old wheels,

But even though you can鈥檛 wait to drive,

Remember the days where you鈥檙e free and alive,

No car, no payments, no flat tires,

No messing with the little old wires,

Fourteen is great so be happy while you鈥檙e there,

The only thing to worry about is your friend鈥檚 in your hair!



3) Happy thanksgiving!

Make yourself welcome and take off your hat,

Don't eat too much or you'll become fat,

Take off your coat or you'll become sweaty,

Gather around and pull out confetti,

Eat your food, and get your fill,

Don't eat too much or you'll become ill,

A turkey, potatoes, some gravy a pie,

Go ahead eat, and don't be shy,

Eat; eat, to your hearts content,

Get up, leave, and don't relent,

Hope you enjoyed the dinner we made,

We won't let you leave until you've paid!



4) Merry Christmas

Its Christmas time at last,

Whip the tree out fast,

Wrap the presents quick,

Make sure you wrap them slick,

Rip them open look with glee,

You might even get a new TV,

Turkey for dinner maybe a ham,

Look at that food, look at that yam,

The stockings the presents the really good food,

You better watch out, don鈥檛 be in a bad mood,

But lets not forget the reason for this day,

The little boy who was laid in the hay,

Mary and Joseph the baby-new born,

People pushed him away, people scorn,

Cherish this day cause its one to remember,

Cherish this day, the twenty-fifth of December,

Remember the reason,

The reason for this season,

The baby boy who lay in a stable,

The one called Christ, he鈥檚 not a fable.Which one of my poems is better? There are 4!?
I like all the poems you posted

it was hard to decide exactly which I like

The first poem is about being human

and treating people the way you like to be

treated.

The birthday poem is about or for someone

who has a birthday. With one year

they are growing up and maturing.

The last two poems are the thanksgiving poem

it is about the fixings of the meal

including the ham and or the turkey.

Christmas is about the birth of baby Jesus

Mary and Joseph.

Christmas is not too far away

I like the lines cherish this day 25th of December

and it is one to remember Which one of my poems is better? There are 4!?
They are all good. I like number 2. I like the humorous style in the last 3.Which one of my poems is better? There are 4!?
i really like the chrirstmas one

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